Oh Fairy Tail

No, just, just no. Dragon Ball Z could pull this kind of bull crap because it was ironically self-aware (or some such). you don't have the skill nor background to do this.

Seriously, you set up a training montage. Then you pull out of it with a SECOND time skip in about four chapters, which could create an interesting plot line where the characters go into the tournament way underprepared and level up during it.

Then you offer them a power up for no cost. Power ups without a cost are BULLSHIT. Seriously, the worst levels of bleach don't even pull this kind of bull shit. Dragon Ball Z sometimes gave out powerups at random, but it usually came at the cost of great injury or the deaths of friends.

Please just stop sucking. I've just stopped caring. You've got exactly ONE character I like (still love you Erza) and that's all that's kept me thus far. Get much worse and I'm gone. Hell, you're worse than Bleach and I only kept that one going because it was my first manga and I like a lot of it's ridiculously extensive cast.

EDIT: DUDE I totally made this skin. Though obviously I didn't creat the art.

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